Blog Review
Porn Star Blogs Part 2
The August issue of Unzipped Magazine will bring you “another round up of triple-X online diaries” (sorry Ken, had to quote you on that). In the June issue, they reviewed several porn stars’ blogs, including RJ Danvers. He got a B+ on his. I’m jealous :-p
I had the luck to be part of this next segment among big names in this industry, like Ben Andrews, Francesco D’Macho and Brent Corrigan (he got a A-).
The review is quite good and since I read it a few weeks ago, I’ve been trying to improve on things he mentioned that I thought would be worth changing. For example, he mentions my lack of punctuation, but he doesn’t give me a break for having ESL - English as a Second Language - like he gave Victor Banda 
– Does he even know I’m Brazilian? He also mentions the excessive use of “… ellipses and … well…”. I’ve been trying, not sure if you noticed, to stop with the ellipses. I haven’t had a single post since the beginning of June that I have used my usual “…” and ‘well’, well, I just can’t stop using that. I guess I just write the way I talk. lol
He gave me a B, even though of course, I thought I deserved a little ‘+’ lol. His final word is also quite cool and I’ll probably be using his words in my site somewhere, hopefully he won’t charge me royalties :-p “Spirited, sexy musings from the hot up-and-comer make this Web destination one hot piece of Hass”. I liked it 
That’s all for now. I posted the page of the magazine below if you wanna read the whole review. (just keep clicking on it until it gets big enough – it’s like a limp dick lol) And don’t forget to get the magazine so you can read the others. There’re a lot of good people being reviewed this time again.
xxx
Luke
July 19th, 2008 at 5:22 pm
“…one hot piece of Hass” is a great line and pretty much covers your role in “Just The Sex” too. Congrats on the “B” but that is just way too low a grade for all the great stuff you post (bias included
Keep on keeping on and just be yourself …’s included … or, well, maybe just a few less… LOL
That’s a pretty nice pic you posted as well — someone must have been clicking on what was a limp dick, perhaps?
Have a good one, sir
Will in CA
July 20th, 2008 at 2:44 am
Maybe the B was for big dick. In which case it was wel deserved!
July 31st, 2008 at 7:45 am
I think your writing is just fine. Remember , he is a professional writer. I bet his other attributes fall short when compared to yours.
September 29th, 2008 at 6:03 pm
I like the way you write your blogs..its straight and simple.At the pic is really cool..want to know did you ever played a bottom in any movie?